2. Reflection
- The feedback I got on my previous elevator pitch that stood out the most to me was that I should prop up my camera so that I wasn't looking down at it. I feel this is a bit more essential criticism as opposed to insightful criticism, because it really made a difference. Furthermore, I was advised to grab the viewers' attention in the beginning and to possibly include a quantitative statistic that would support my pitch.
3. Changes
- The main change I made to this elevator pitch was lifting my camera, so I wouldn't be looking downwards like I was in my last elevator pitch. Another cinematographic change I made was moving my camera to a different side of my room, so that I could have much better lighting in my pitch. Because of this, my third elevator pitch was a lot more engaging and less blurry than my previous. Finally, I cut down on the hand gestures and experimented with my articulation, so the true focus of the video is what I have to say.